ext_19837 ([identity profile] allyndra.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] allyndra 2007-08-12 04:46 pm (UTC)

Yay! Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!

Eee, and you snuck in a little bit of Willow friendship! I love Willow and Xander. Willow is usually at least mentioned in all my Xander fics, just because I think she's always a part of his life. (One of my favorite moments from the show was in Reptile Boy, when they shared their snacks and talked about Xander crashing the frat party. It just showed such familiar friendship. That's always in the back of my mind when I write Xander.)

there are enough details to be sure that Pike is feeling the exact same way Yes! I tried several times to write this from Pike's POV because I wanted to show how he felt about Xander, but it just would not work. So I was hopeful that there was enough Pike in here to get some emotion across. Because he's really very much in love with our Xander, even if he doesn't say it out loud.

Thank you for your comments! I'll give Benny/Pike some thought and see if I can come up with some pre-Buffy fun.

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