ext_20224 ([identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] allyndra 2007-04-11 02:41 am (UTC)

I came over on xanzpet's rec. Very good fic you got here! I like the friendship and comraderie among the three of them. I like the acceptance of each other they have; and Riley's surprised awakening was handled nicely.

Your description of Xander's dance scene was great. Very appealing with that touch of shyness, with the grace and good looks.



Pesti

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