I came over on xanzpet's rec. Very good fic you got here! I like the friendship and comraderie among the three of them. I like the acceptance of each other they have; and Riley's surprised awakening was handled nicely.
Your description of Xander's dance scene was great. Very appealing with that touch of shyness, with the grace and good looks.
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Your description of Xander's dance scene was great. Very appealing with that touch of shyness, with the grace and good looks.
Pesti