ext_7363 ([identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] allyndra 2007-12-04 04:35 pm (UTC)

You're interweaving canon delightfully, and I love that Riley was in the pub as a part of his Initiative assignment. He's such a good guy, I can see him hating acting the jerky frat boy. Xander was just the right balance of competent and flustered on the job. It made his gravitating toward a friendly face ring true.

Forrest's "One thing about being a straight guy watching male strippers: you spend a lot of time looking at their faces..." made me laugh. So did Riley's accusatory "You made me gay!" This is wonderful stuff.

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