ext_20224 ([identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] allyndra 2007-04-11 02:57 am (UTC)

"One thing about being a straight guy watching male strippers: you spend a lot of time looking at their faces."


*laughs*


I just bet. This was very funny, and cute. They may not have much in common in terms of background, but they *do* have complementary personalities.


I like how you made Xander a competent bartender (considering it's his first night, he's not doing too badly), but not somebody from Cocktails. More realistic that way. Puts his family background to work for him, for a change.


I love how you've characterized all of them. Poor Riley gets bashed so much, it's nice to see somebody appreciating him!


Pesti

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