To begin this review I would like to say fantastic job! You have made me fall so completely in love with this story I had to figure out my password just to leave this review. Not to say your other work is not great, because it is, but this took my breath away.

My first encounter to your work was your HP/Buffy crossover which made me curious and I had to read the rest of your work. I now keep an eye on you for new fiction and updates of your current series which leads me to this fantastic piece of fiction.

I love the way you started out the piece with the fragment of the dream to entice and set to tone. Riley’s confusion and struggle to understand the dreams throughout the first chapter really captures and speaks out to the reader. I defiantly have to complement you on your erotic scenes between the boys. Some of the best and most tasteful I have had the pleasure of reading. It wasn’t just sex but the emotion was there in the words, a skill many writers fail to grasp. I didn’t see any glaring grammatical errors but I was too involved in the story to be looking for them.

Again I want to convey what a wonder piece this is and you truly are a fantastic author. I think this piece is the raciest you have done thus far and you did a superb job. I truly look forward to more fiction from you and hope you never lose your joy in writing.