You have no idea how much I loved this! Spike and Xander were just adorable and you nailed Xander's voice. "Watch your step," she ordered in a tone that made it sound more like she was hoping he would fall from the moving platform to a grisly death by Doombuggy. So Xander!
Plus, he so would work at DW for the rides! This was a hoot and a half. I also really enjoyed how two out gay boys can find each other and flirt so naturally. Stumbling here and there but no need to be over the top. I almost might have said this was written by a gay man....until I checked your profile. But I think it just shows how well you've written Xander and Spike here.
I figured that you must have worked there, you captured the place so vividly. I've always wanted to know the secrets to the Mansion so I was thrilled you took us through there. Now how does the ghosts appear in the chairs? I've never figured that out.
I will most definitely keep an eye out for more of this verse! Wonderful!
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Date: 2007-07-05 06:43 am (UTC)Plus, he so would work at DW for the rides! This was a hoot and a half. I also really enjoyed how two out gay boys can find each other and flirt so naturally. Stumbling here and there but no need to be over the top. I almost might have said this was written by a gay man....until I checked your profile. But I think it just shows how well you've written Xander and Spike here.
I figured that you must have worked there, you captured the place so vividly. I've always wanted to know the secrets to the Mansion so I was thrilled you took us through there. Now how does the ghosts appear in the chairs? I've never figured that out.
I will most definitely keep an eye out for more of this verse! Wonderful!