ok. i'm going to try to leave a coherent comment here...
Loved the bookend sentences Loved your Vince voice (SPOT-ON!) Loved the imagery Loved the way you described Eric losing his cool Loved the seriously flail-worthy hotness of the love scene (i was going to say sex but i changed it, just seemed like the thing to do) But mostly? LOVED this line -
"It was like E took up so much space in his mind, Vince had expected him to take up more space physically."
You just summed up Eric PERFECTLY. And Kevin too :D
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Date: 2007-09-19 07:44 pm (UTC)Loved the bookend sentences
Loved your Vince voice (SPOT-ON!)
Loved the imagery
Loved the way you described Eric losing his cool
Loved the seriously flail-worthy hotness of the love scene (i was going to say sex but i changed it, just seemed like the thing to do)
But mostly?
LOVED this line -
"It was like E took up so much space in his mind, Vince had expected him to take up more space physically."
You just summed up Eric PERFECTLY. And Kevin too :D
Thank You times a million ♥ ♥ ♥