Loved the bookend sentences I've had the first sentence in my head for months, but I wasn't quite sure what would follow. Now we know. :o)
Loved your Vince voice (SPOT-ON!) I don't think I've ever cussed as much in my life as I did in this story. (Really. I tried cussing when I was a teenager, but people usually laughed at me and said I sounded funny, so I stopped.)
Loved the seriously flail-worthy hotness of the love scene You don't know how happy that makes me. I'm incredibly self-conscious about my smut, so I'm thrilled that you found it hot.
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Re: 'insert dolphin noise here'
Date: 2007-09-19 08:20 pm (UTC)Loved the bookend sentences I've had the first sentence in my head for months, but I wasn't quite sure what would follow. Now we know. :o)
Loved your Vince voice (SPOT-ON!) I don't think I've ever cussed as much in my life as I did in this story. (Really. I tried cussing when I was a teenager, but people usually laughed at me and said I sounded funny, so I stopped.)
Loved the seriously flail-worthy hotness of the love scene You don't know how happy that makes me. I'm incredibly self-conscious about my smut, so I'm thrilled that you found it hot.
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