Eric was the first person who ever called Vince pretty. Vince was the first person who ever called Eric pretty.
Oooh! Very nice! I love how you sandwich the story in between those two sentences, and how you show what Vince's prettiness has meant for him in his life, and how E factors into it, and how Vince earns to use it in so many ways - even as a weapon, and even against E.
And how it all turns out well even so, because they love each other. :-)
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Date: 2007-09-20 02:00 pm (UTC)Vince was the first person who ever called Eric pretty.
Oooh! Very nice! I love how you sandwich the story in between those two sentences, and how you show what Vince's prettiness has meant for him in his life, and how E factors into it, and how Vince earns to use it in so many ways - even as a weapon, and even against E.
And how it all turns out well even so, because they love each other. :-)