Awwww! I'm so in love with this version of Gunn and Xander!
I really liked all the details you used throughout the story -- the girl holding the live pig at the entrance to the fair, the rides Gunn went on (I *heart* the Scrambler and Tilt O' Whirl), Gunn's choice of his platonic friend prize, and the series of kisses at the end. Thanks so much for incorporating all the elements so very well! I enjoyed this a lot.
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Date: 2007-02-13 06:23 pm (UTC)I really liked all the details you used throughout the story -- the girl holding the live pig at the entrance to the fair, the rides Gunn went on (I *heart* the Scrambler and Tilt O' Whirl), Gunn's choice of his platonic friend prize, and the series of kisses at the end. Thanks so much for incorporating all the elements so very well! I enjoyed this a lot.